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Remember the time when you were dead?
You woke up in a coffin instead of a bed.
Fate has decided fate must be true,
But come on and tell me why must it be you?

I see you behind the mirrored glass,
Straight jacket muzzle mask,.
Kicking and screaming tied to a chair.
Come on and tell me, this just isnít fair.

Its time to go and leave this place,
Lay to rest, and forget that face.
Now its over you can breathe,
We know your safe, and I can leave.
Dark
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:iconthewiccagirl18:
I really love this poem.
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PutridRaven Mar 1, 2014  New member Student General Artist
you should write more, honestly! this one is great!
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:iconprincessnolife:
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
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:iconbrokennxygosvintha:

amazing poem I write poems myself :)

 

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:iconpuglover484:
that is freaking awesome
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:iconpixilmaster:
pixilmaster Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
may i have permission to expand this poem and turn it into a song?
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:iconviralcode666:
dark brandon; i must say thats even better than mine. bravo! bravo!

toon brandon dabs his eyes with a handkerchief "beautiful sob"

mean brandon: even i'm speechless.

diva brandon: it's got a flow to it i approve.
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Redbuick95 Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice
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LeadKisses Dec 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow. . . That is dark indeed. . .
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stopabull1 Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love it.
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