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Remember the time when you were dead?
You woke up in a coffin instead of a bed.
Fate has decided fate must be true,
But come on and tell me why must it be you?

I see you behind the mirrored glass,
Straight jacket muzzle mask,.
Kicking and screaming tied to a chair.
Come on and tell me, this just isn’t fair.

Its time to go and leave this place,
Lay to rest, and forget that face.
Now its over you can breathe,
We know your safe, and I can leave.
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UnbearableME Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
this is an awesome poem :)
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thewiccagirl18 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
I really love this poem.
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PutridRaven Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student General Artist
you should write more, honestly! this one is great!
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princessnolife Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
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BrokenNxyGosvintha Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013

amazing poem I write poems myself :)

 

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puglover484 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
that is freaking awesome
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pixilmaster Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
may i have permission to expand this poem and turn it into a song?
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viralcode666 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
dark brandon; i must say thats even better than mine. bravo! bravo!

toon brandon dabs his eyes with a handkerchief "beautiful sob"

mean brandon: even i'm speechless.

diva brandon: it's got a flow to it i approve.
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Redbuick95 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice
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LeadKisses Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow. . . That is dark indeed. . .
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